BSA Drawing Class 11

 BSA Drawing

Hi!

Today we got feedback on our drawing proposals. Mine was mostly about how there was no action and was just a lot of 'talking heads' shots. It was also mentioned that there was a lot of blank space that needed to be filled. One thing was that the art style fit the story, which surprised me as I planned on changing the style since I didn't really like it. I then re-wrote most of the comic and sketched out some thumbs of the last 2/3 of the comic. I also plan to revamp the rest of the comic too to make it more visually interesting. I re-wrote the story to reveal that Mikayla is a vigilante through Chase seeing her fighting some people in costume. He then confronts her in class and the others find out. Mikayla then goes and starts another fight while mad and is overwhelmed. She thinks she is going to get hurt but she is suddenly saved by the others with their project helmets. I will also change the project at the start to be a set of prototype helmets designed for firefighters that can heat seek and alert to collapsing beams and such.